Name: Ramona
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[/] They are possessed by a demon (She acts like one.)
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[ ] They are physically strong
[] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal kinda
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size (Flat chested Kerioans XD)
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular (scrawny kid XD)
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family (He's from a poor bunch!)
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[X] They have lost one/both of their parents. (Mom at Emomo's birth, and her little brother murdered her father.)
[X] They ran away from home (Once, but she returned shortly after getting hungry)
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death (She was the one holding down her father when Emomo shot him!)
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends
[X] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[X] They are currently in a relationship (It's more of a Love/hate relationship with Rockey)
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[X] They are a psycho
[X] They have multiple personalities
[/] They are very intelligent sometimes
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[X] They have a rare/unusual name (Emomo calls her Ray or Ray-Ray)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[/] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood (The humans are rude to Keroians! Have you seen Natsumi?)
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[X] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives (Just for a week!)
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[X] They are from a different country to where they live (Different Planet!)
[X] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of .....
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (Banages on her arm)
[ ] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 16.5
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke
[X] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper
[X] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 13.5
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side.
6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26< -Mary-Sue
Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?
Ramona: You made me seem like a total bitch!
Emomo: Fits...